Ohio Impromptu

I honestly don't remember. I think in the time that I joined here I joined a bunch of other (not so good, naturally) writing forums, so I think I was ...

Secretly, eh? 8)

Congratulations* With a T. Anyway, it seems pretty good at the moment, but I think it needs that extra something to make it stand out. I really hope you make ...

I think if a dictionary were thrown in a blender with a pint of blood and vomit, ingested by a homeless man with a severe case of gingivitis and then ...

It wasn't as good as some of the other stuff I've seen from you, but still good nonetheless. You got the point across, which is what you were trying to ...

Chapter 1 can be viewed here: I've nothing to say, really. Enjoy. Chapter 2 Alistair Wintergreen was born in a small village near Paris, untouched by Germany’s war, in 1941, ...

You know what I think. :wink: I liked that last bit, the one I hadn't seen yet. Once again, same reasons as the rest of it. I'll get my publisher ...

The title was a bit unoriginal, but aside from that I thought this was good. I'm feeling philosophical today, so that's probably why I liked it as much as I ...

"I think mum went out, but I can't remember 'cause I wasn't paying attention."

A young man of about 25 sits alone at the bar continuously orders shots of his good friend vodka and stares at each empty glass as he puts it back ...

The main problem I have that I like people to help me with is if I've made what's happening clear. My English teacher last year was the best help I ...

Yes, it does need some work but I think you can handle it well enough. I love the concept and tone though. It's so arrogant and alienating, just because of ...

I liked it. You could leave it as is, or if you want to expand it then I think there's definately potential there. *is excited because it feels like for ...

Splendid.

If you are familiar with the name Lee Harding, I may have to destroy you.